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[Wade, I'm Coming Home]

Well done, SS.

You guys sure are improving. Good luck on AFagsD2.

xtil responds:

why thank you sir

[WoW: Two years later 1A]

Sorry, the idea was nice but it's not impressing..

Here's where you went wrong in Flash:

- You used the damn map from WoW! You shoulda drawn it by hand, with reference of that map. That would show you put effort into it.
- Your voice acting was horrible! Did you really record that, or did you use some lame program?
- What you did .. well .. the things that's supposed to be passed off as voice acting, looked terrible. You used still images and made some blurry drawing that change every so frames that was on a layer above it..
- The graphics .. well, they were okay, but very very amuteur. Unfortunatly, they don't make up for the voice acting and lyp synching.
- I know you asked us not to be biassed about the length to give you a chance. I respect that. But it was also too short to make up for anything.
- The storyline was unclear, and it will probably remain unclear once part 2 is submitted.

Here's where you went wrong in the story:

- Sargeras is NOT a pit lord, he's a Titan.
- You were showing the wrong continents of Azeroth during your story. Warcraft 1 and 2 take place on the Eastern Kingdoms. Warcraft 3, after the first 2 campaigns, takes place in the other continent.
Warcraft 3: TFT takes place on the lands that were once from the Kaldorei (now an island off the coast), the Tomb of Sargeras, and Northrend.
- Uhhhm. The Naga aren't the eldest race in the world... They were once part of the eldest race (the Kaldorei, or Night Elves) but have since become so much apart they can no longer be considered the same.

Overall: I won't vote terrible low on this, because I think it deserves a chance. But this wasn't a very good animation, so just try harder okay? Look at some lip synch tutorials (search for these in the portal: LipSynchTutorial-DarkDepts / Easy Lip Synch Tutorial / Lip Synch Tutorial), browse trough some toturials on how to add some life to your graphics (Tutorial On Colouring from Sneakers - you might want to check the other tutorials from him, too), and put just a bit more effort into it next time.

And please, don't use things you haven't drawn yourself (i.e. the map). It just gives off a wrong impression.

Dipshitprod responds:

allright, now it's my turn XD

-Sargeras IS a pit lord, please, if you have info, use it all, since I took three days to search all story books in the game itself and read the entire instruction book AND the srat. guide.
-you are right about the naga, but I need to adjust things to make stuff more exciting for the vieuwers, you know how it works =D
-The map didn't make any "travel" about where 1 and 2 where and such, it was just to show you the world, why: because in part 3 there wasn't even Dun'Morogh, that was Quel'Thalas back then =D
-The first 2 campaigns in 3 did not take place in entire Azeroth, but Only in Lordearon and Quel'Thalas (now Dun'Morogh)
-I did record my voices, with windows recorder, but my computer makes a bit of noise... =/
-I was forced to make this movie this short, I had to split it in two because of problems, such as the sync-bug since I'm still using MX, I split up because this might prevent further fuck-up
-once I submint part >>>1B<<<< all the storylines will get clear, except the storyline of bishoujo/Ixidur/Kanata, this is the big evolving plot
-TFT also takes place in Lordearon and in Durotar.

[All NG Fads Die!!! 3!!!]

WOO!

This is now my number one! I loved this. Even Johnny Rocketfingers was in there. Way to go!
You made fun of so much stuff that I don't think anyone could be angry about you making fun of their stuff ;)
But I'm helluva glad you made fun of CC!

Great graphics, awesome music (the bizkit is still one of my favorite musicians, and you guys picked the best of his songs), music and graphics worked together really well, great style.. It's just great!

If I get better with flash sometime I might make a part for this too, but don't expect that soon :D.

MACception responds:

Practice makes perfect man! Just keep trying, and you'll keep improving. Thanks for everything, and yes, Limp Bizkit ROCKS. So tired of people hating them ;-)

-LP

[Mario's Future. part 1]

Ga zo door! :)

Nice work, man. Keep it up!

Fastluigi responds:

Dank je wel!

this took me time, i think it wont get blammed, nope!

[Harry Potter Revisited 2]

LMAO

I laughed só hard when Hermione came in with that high-pitched voice "How are you gentlemen? All your base are belong to us!" ... I think that was the funniest bit in the whole movie, and just .. completely random too XD

Make more, or so help me Dumbledore! (hey, that rymed :D)

UtterNonsense responds:

This one (for real this time) won't take as long as the last one. We're already planning a time (in October) that we're going to record. And stop praising Hermione, my voice still hurts from that one... :)

[Oh Boy I love Clocks]

This'll probably be blammed...

...by exactly the same reasoning that gave Strawberry Clock as high rating as he had gotten, and by exactly the same reasoning that gives anything with "clock" in it the high ratings they get.

But I'm voting 5 in the hopes that this doesn't get blammed.

As a side-note; some clock movies are actually fun. But think of how much funnier they would be if they were original.

CaptainDiv responds:

i agree - the "lord of the clocks" film was pretty awesome - I'm not against that - im against a 2 second loop getting a rating of 3.6 just because its a clock film on clock day - and whey-hey - not blammed! My faith in modern society is restored!

[Random Stick Jump]

Hmmm

You need some originality. Stick movies are a dime in a dozen. Some stick movies are good though, because they have an own kind of feeling to it. This is plain stick, and done before.

What's good about this is that it's fluid, but other than that, that's it.
Also, the wind sound was too loud compared to the other sounds and the last sound when he falls into the factory comes too soon. Put some empty frames in between ;)

Very fluid, good art, but unoriginal.

FlangeLord responds:

Thanks...I think

[Drawing Contest #2]

Inspiring!

Player 2 wins! his drawing of Snake was too cool for words, even if it doesn't count XD. That was really funny, the coolest drawing in the flash and then "I think I'm wrong... *erase*" .. anyway, he wins!

Cool flash. Fun idea dude, and easy! Definatly worthy of my favourites!

ForestXion responds:

my friend laughed so hard...
thanks for reviewing =)

[You are dreaming.]

The triangle..

..was that supposed to be the third chakra (the inner eye)?
I once took a test which told me my third chakra, the one for knowledge, was my most open one - perhaps that's why i liked this animation as much as i did.

At first though, i didn't really trust it. I was a bit scared, so i read the reviews to see if there was a warning in there :)

Makes me curious. A bit of explanation, please?

PureCarnage responds:

What is there to explain really, it's pretty cut and dry. I see this reality as a dream. I express that view in this animation. We are dreaming right now, can we realize it? Some do.

[Xiao Xiao vs. Stickee]

Pretty nice

But the "Blueish grey box" didn't appear. Might wanna fix that. Anyway, pretty cool. Good choice of music, too.

cBAdvanced-123456789 responds:

"But the "Blueish grey box" didn't appear"

the box is about the "play button"