Ivaron's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Truth About SBC]

Oh, man!

I guess I'm kind of a negative person, but even though there's alot of flashes on newgrounds I like, there's not a lot that even make me slightly smile.... This one had me laughing out loud.

Thank you for that!

[WoW: Two years later 1A]

Sorry, the idea was nice but it's not impressing..

Here's where you went wrong in Flash:

- You used the damn map from WoW! You shoulda drawn it by hand, with reference of that map. That would show you put effort into it.
- Your voice acting was horrible! Did you really record that, or did you use some lame program?
- What you did .. well .. the things that's supposed to be passed off as voice acting, looked terrible. You used still images and made some blurry drawing that change every so frames that was on a layer above it..
- The graphics .. well, they were okay, but very very amuteur. Unfortunatly, they don't make up for the voice acting and lyp synching.
- I know you asked us not to be biassed about the length to give you a chance. I respect that. But it was also too short to make up for anything.
- The storyline was unclear, and it will probably remain unclear once part 2 is submitted.

Here's where you went wrong in the story:

- Sargeras is NOT a pit lord, he's a Titan.
- You were showing the wrong continents of Azeroth during your story. Warcraft 1 and 2 take place on the Eastern Kingdoms. Warcraft 3, after the first 2 campaigns, takes place in the other continent.
Warcraft 3: TFT takes place on the lands that were once from the Kaldorei (now an island off the coast), the Tomb of Sargeras, and Northrend.
- Uhhhm. The Naga aren't the eldest race in the world... They were once part of the eldest race (the Kaldorei, or Night Elves) but have since become so much apart they can no longer be considered the same.

Overall: I won't vote terrible low on this, because I think it deserves a chance. But this wasn't a very good animation, so just try harder okay? Look at some lip synch tutorials (search for these in the portal: LipSynchTutorial-DarkDepts / Easy Lip Synch Tutorial / Lip Synch Tutorial), browse trough some toturials on how to add some life to your graphics (Tutorial On Colouring from Sneakers - you might want to check the other tutorials from him, too), and put just a bit more effort into it next time.

And please, don't use things you haven't drawn yourself (i.e. the map). It just gives off a wrong impression.

Dipshitprod responds:

allright, now it's my turn XD

-Sargeras IS a pit lord, please, if you have info, use it all, since I took three days to search all story books in the game itself and read the entire instruction book AND the srat. guide.
-you are right about the naga, but I need to adjust things to make stuff more exciting for the vieuwers, you know how it works =D
-The map didn't make any "travel" about where 1 and 2 where and such, it was just to show you the world, why: because in part 3 there wasn't even Dun'Morogh, that was Quel'Thalas back then =D
-The first 2 campaigns in 3 did not take place in entire Azeroth, but Only in Lordearon and Quel'Thalas (now Dun'Morogh)
-I did record my voices, with windows recorder, but my computer makes a bit of noise... =/
-I was forced to make this movie this short, I had to split it in two because of problems, such as the sync-bug since I'm still using MX, I split up because this might prevent further fuck-up
-once I submint part >>>1B<<<< all the storylines will get clear, except the storyline of bishoujo/Ixidur/Kanata, this is the big evolving plot
-TFT also takes place in Lordearon and in Durotar.

[Nightwish Collab]

Great!

I would have probably picked another song, but this collab was great nonetheless.

NIGHTWISH RULES!!!!!!!!!!

The thumb: Not down, not slightly up, not fully up, but 999999999999% up!

[All NG Fads Die!!! 3!!!]

WOO!

This is now my number one! I loved this. Even Johnny Rocketfingers was in there. Way to go!
You made fun of so much stuff that I don't think anyone could be angry about you making fun of their stuff ;)
But I'm helluva glad you made fun of CC!

Great graphics, awesome music (the bizkit is still one of my favorite musicians, and you guys picked the best of his songs), music and graphics worked together really well, great style.. It's just great!

If I get better with flash sometime I might make a part for this too, but don't expect that soon :D.

MACception responds:

Practice makes perfect man! Just keep trying, and you'll keep improving. Thanks for everything, and yes, Limp Bizkit ROCKS. So tired of people hating them ;-)

-LP

[Mario's Future. part 1]

Ga zo door! :)

Nice work, man. Keep it up!

Fastluigi responds:

Dank je wel!

this took me time, i think it wont get blammed, nope!

[A Happy Halloween]

Great Audio!!

The audio in this one ruled so much ... Let's see ..
1) you had a great toony happyhappy-like song at the start ...
2) you used the sound from Celebrity Jeopardy
3) you had cool credits music.

The drawing and voice acting was good too.

Well done man, well done!

[-Fight for your Lemons-]

Pretty good.

I almost wet myself laughing at the expression on that black guys face XD. So vulnarable, LOL.
It could have have done without the lame intermission, but oh well. Nice little thing to view once or twice, then forget about :)

[- The Rocks -]

It's nice.

Not really great, but it's good though. Shame for repeating the same 'rock' joke the whole submission long. Also, the music was a bit too loud, at some points I had a hard time understanding what the rocks were saying.
And the address at the end of the flash should be resized (check it out).

Overall, a good flash though. That left rock was annoying! :)

[Don't Pick Your Nose]

Those voices!!!!

LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO<insert more of such>

[Contra Insanity]

More like contra-sanity!

What the hell just happened?